Well firstly this is supposed to be a guide for foreign people, so how do you think they will understand that russian text which is written in the biography section?
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creating the illusion that the ninja pierced with thorns and completely immobilized.
Enemy is not immobilized by thorns. It is supposed to be some kind of a metal or stone barrier. Thorns, in Russian means ===>корни
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almost the same as a Genjutsu just naruto damage with the use of the Sharingan
I am not sure what you were planning to say. My guess is that you wanted to mention Naruto's encounter with Itachi in the forest? Well there is no real point on mentioning that in the "skill description" section because some people may haven't watched anime. Think about it.
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Technology does not create great balls of fire with a significant spread in the collision causing damage to 25
Did you at least understand what you've wrote?
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Tsukuomi
Tsukuyomi is one of the most powerful genjutsu in existence. it is unique to the Uchiha clan and only those with the Mangekyō Sharingan can perform it. It is said to represent the Spiritual World and Darkness the antipode to Amaterasu, a ninjutsu of similar power.
I cant see any descriptions of the skill. You didn't mention that the enemy is going to get holded by itachi for a big period of time. Man what is the point of writing stuff which people already know?for fucks sake....
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Amaterasu
Is a sun goddess and one of the principal Shinto deities. The meaning of her name, Amaterasu-ōmikami, is "the great august kami who shines in the heaven".She was born from the left eye of Izanagi as he purified himself in a river and went on to become the ruler of the Higher Celestial Plain
Again no description about the skill.
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Susano'o
Susana is the third, the final technique Mangeke. Causes a great spirit, armed with two artifacts - the legendary sword of Totsuka, (he is known as a sword "katana Sakegari" weapons sealing force) stun an opponent for a few seconds (probably 3-4 seconds), and sending his soul in eternal sleep to wander around another dimension, and a shield "yata mirror" reflecting any attack . Susano'o, the most powerful technique Itachi, that would make this technique to that used to Itachi Tsukiemi and Ametarasu. Fascinated by the sword the most powerful sealing technique, he opposed the sword Kusanagi
A lot of useless information such as the story behind that feat. Players don't need that.
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in the first duel, you need to catch the enemy in the 2 Genjutsu go away and use the Katon then give just stayed still and 1 Genjutsu leave it if the enemy has sylno cause damage skills (Chidori Rasengan raykiri) throws Genjutsu on the enemy, and runs off far away so that power ended after this again use the Katon and beat the enemy
in subsequent duels are already emerging active things (bow or crossbow) in the more powerful abilities begin to combine (first use Genjutsu to camp and shoot bow at the enemy
Translator, translator, translator................
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В пункте 9 ты забыл код картинки, пишу на русском, ибо обращаюсь преимущественно к ТС'у.
With all due respect Mr. Moderator but this is an english part of the website, so it would make a perfect sence to write in english here. I don't think it would be fair on "international" part of our community to speak in a foreign language with them. Plus the fact that you are an administrator you should set an example for other users of what a proper admin should be like. Along with this kind of issue i found you writing this sort of stuff in other topics which are not allowed to be commented.
In my opinion the guide is quite poor, images don't seem to work for some reason, the skill's description is on russian and it should be on english obviously, and use of the translator has been found which makes this guide look quite poor in quality.